Fifth Class
Proficiency English II :D
Assalamualaikum w.b.t my dear reader :)
How your fasting month ? is it okayh ? sure okayh
right :D
So today I would to share about my English class .
We have already 5 class , so we near to FINAL countdown . Make me feels like
what a joke so fast nowadays hahaha . okayh today Madam Norbaiti explains with
us about a good essays . Madam give us example of thesis statement for us to
read and check the words their use . Normally most of us just use a simple
words or language when writing on essay just like what I do now hahaha . In
other words to make our essays looks great we also must arrange it in a correct
order . We need to make our essay easy to understand and smooth when people
read it .
Madam ask us to divide our part of essay such main
ideas , body and conclusion . In body part we must have a point for us to
support our main ideas and then elaborate it to make our essays perfect ! As a
student essays need to score in exam because essays have a lot of marks . So to
get more marks our essays must have more quality point than quantity actually .
There no use if you have many point but then you not arrange it in a proper way
and and elaborate it . Madam do an exercise based on graph , so we need make an
essays based on the information given . It looks easy but you need to think
outside the box for make your essays more BOMBASTIC ! :)
